edc performance comments-shilei
hahas, aft reading ah i also got my own comments hahas here goes. then can take note then learn frm mistakes yupps.=DD

personally, I think the emcees not that good la, got room for improvement. Cos I couldn’t hear properly what they were talking about. Then got one part which one the emcee’s mike got problem but then he still continued talking without the mike and we couldn’t even hear what he is talking about. He should have just borrowed the other emcee’s mike. Then can learn another thing which is must pai more, as in tech run all these. Then all those problems with mikes etc can will have lesser chance of it not working etc. yupps.

1st ju : i think its ok , average,.but then some parts weird weird de cos saw some flaws.. like the mother open the door to her daughter's room then somehow the door disappear and then she can walk through the walls de. then also got call people without dialing the phone and the teacher collect worksheets then later the worksheets in her hand disappear. yupps.so next time must be careful la. cos can audience can see all these de. I also heard a lot of feedback then can hear people talking at backstage la. i think actually they can do better de. hten like hengxin said, i quite like the colourful chairs also and their stage plan was simple and nice but then they shouldnt have so much huan chang ya.

2nd ju: I think it is quite luan la. Personally, I dun really know wad they trying to show. Something about raffles building the Singapore. However I dun really know wad they dance or sing that part was for. then some people never really put emotions into their lines then very monotone .so ya, must take note also..

3rd ju: I like that ju best haha =DD Cos it was funny which can appeal to the audience and then the actors were good ya. =D I think the ahmah part was very amusing. hahaha. That part I was laughing like siao. Yea. Then I think that ju also got meaning cos it potrays some prejudice some people have towards other people of different countries/race etc.then their ju got quite a lot of ppl who can act well la. Yupps I enjoyed the show even though I watch before. Second time watch also veri nice hahas. Then I think that ju was he best of the 3 la. Yupps

so overall, I think last year one better la. Although last I think their stage plan wasn’t really good cos is sometimes cant see what they acting cos their back facing us but I think last year their script better than this year one. Yupps. However also can see they got put in effort cos I come back sch always see them do publicity and stuff la. So ya, from here we can learn quite a lot frm them, the good and bad parts.继续加油 ba =D

One awesome song-qinzhi
One awesome song.. by the Beatles. Awesome lyrics, awesome melody, awesome arrangement albeit simple.

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The Beatles - Across The Universe

Words are flowing out like endless rain into a paper cup,
They slither while they pass, they slip away Across the Universe.
Pools of sorrow, waves of joy are drifting through my opened mind,
Possessing and caressing me.

Jai Guru Deva Om

Nothing's gonna change my world,
Nothing's gonna change my world.
Nothing's gonna change my world,
Nothing's gonna change my world.

Images of broken light which dance before me like a million eyes,
They call me on and on Across the Universe.
Thoughts meander like a restless wind inside a letter box,
They tumble blindly as they make their way Across the Universe

Jai Guru Deva Om

Nothing's gonna change my world,
Nothing's gonna change my world.
Nothing's gonna change my world,
Nothing's gonna change my world.

Sounds of laughter, shades of earth are ringing
Through my open ears inciting and inviting me.
Limitless, undying love, which shines around me like a million suns,
And calls me on and on Across the Universe

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Only John Lennon can think of these good shites. Right click here and click Save As... to download the cover by Fiona Apple, which I think is more appealing to young people. I don't want any of you to be bored by Beatles. THEY ARE DAMN GOOD.

qinzhi

一句简单的话 - 沈惠娟
"I can't carry it for you, but i can carry you"
- 这句话来自“lord of the ring”。 我不知道是第几部的，但它真的很有意义， 所以李老师就叫我把它放上来和大家分享。

其实，我认为，这是老师们希望学会里的每个成员有的精神：互相扶持。或许你会想： “你又不能帮我做，支持有个屁用啊！” 其实，你错了。当你在最困难时，有人在你的身旁支持你时，就算再累，你都能找到力量继续走下去。而当一个组里面的团员们能互相扶持时，他们的工作效率将会提高很多，因为大家都会因不希望自己会拖累其他队员而努力奋斗， 而这也会使他们的整个工作过程变得更有意义。所以，大家要把这句话牢记在心，在队员或朋友最需要帮忙时，挺身而出！

不知道是我过渡敏感，还是事实。 我觉得最近的学会不但没有互相扶持的现象，反而还有点，互相伤害的现象，senior 看不起 junior, junior不尊重senior。若一个家庭里有这种现象的话，家庭里的成员还能相处得愉快吗？以前不是曾有人说过 “junior是拿来疼的” 吗？难道跟着时间的变更，这句话也实效了吗? 难道因现在是21世纪，junior就不用尊敬senior了吗？若彼此心里有心结的话，我们还能互相扶持吗？说了那么多，只希望大家能好好去想想，是不是因时间的流逝，我们就应该让校友和老板们所辛辛苦苦建立起的学会家庭破裂？

ahscds family= 校友s + 老板s + 现任成员

p.s. 对不起，因为本人的词汇有限，所以有些词汇的用法有点不当。。。

批评的态度要正确－李老板
既然这是一个鼓励评论的网站，在此我想谈一谈如何进行批评。EDC的表演过后，我们学会有位同学在自己的博客(blog)上发表了她的观后感。批评本是一件好事，善意的批评能够让被批评者知道自己的不足之处然后加以改善并进步。但是，很遗憾的，这位同学进行批评时采用了带有污辱性的字眼，不仅得罪了别人，还贬低了自己。这样的批评态度是不对的，在文中她处处抬高CDS贬低EDC，给人的感觉是目中无人，自以为是。

俗语说得好，“虚心使人进步”；圣经中有一句话：“只看到别人眼中的刺thorn，却看不到自己眼中的梁木balk”。为什么要把别人的缺点放大来看？为什么不多看看别人的优点？为什么不同时也看看自己的缺点呢？

话说回来，我们凭什么高高在上指着别人的鼻子批评呢？听说我们会员当中还有人看不起EDC。我们凭什么？我们真的好过别人很多吗？如果没有老师们的教导与督促，没有校友们的引导与帮助，没有学长们的付出与努力，你们会有今天吗？

各位同学，事实上，跟过去比较，我们已经退步了。我们所应该做的是更加努力使自己进步，不要辜负师长与校友们的期望，而不是有了一点小成就就沾沾自喜，开始看不起别人了！

切记，虚心使人进步，不要只看到别人眼中的刺，却看不到自己眼中的梁木。

再见剧院　《再见白蛇》－　小菜
已经有好一段日子没有踏进剧场了。因为加入了戏剧学会，我与戏剧再次结上了缘。那个晚上，我抱着期待又忐忑的心情，重新踏入了剧院，观赏了这出《再见白蛇传》。

在观看这出剧之前，我在报上读了关于这出戏的报导。其中，有个小标题引起了我的注意，类似“不知道自己在演什么”。我一时很纳闷，认为若剧中的演员都不知道自己在演什么，那这出剧会精彩吗？我心中产生了怀疑。恕我的愚昧，我错了。

由于已有好一阵子没有看戏了，所以心里也没有把它和其他的戏做比较。如李老板所说，《再见白蛇传》也并没有我想象中的难看。虽然剧情给我稍许老掉牙的感觉，但“戏中戏”的呈现方式让整出戏不会沉闷。喜欢导演如何将各演员的身份与《白蛇传》中的四大角色挂钩。在剧中，演员们有着双重身份，如礼莲试演“剧中”的白色，但她的真正身份却应是许仙。（之前的留言已经对此说得很详细了，我就不再重复。）只认为导演巧妙地将《白蛇》中的四个人物“玩弄”于剧情当中。然而，功力不够，还蛮难看得懂的。由于少了看戏的经验，我忽略了沛珊对礼莲的爱，以致到后来一直在思考着剧中那最后一幕。但看了欧慧的留言，明白了，也非常赞同。

除了剧情，其实那天也注意到了舞台的摆设。一个真实的大舞台上布置着一个虚构的小舞台，“后台”也“一览无遗”。然而小舞台上却上演着真实的剧情。这使整出戏充满了矛盾冲突。在“台前”，演员们扮演着各自的角色；到了“后台”，演员们却抱着剧中另一角色的身份。有时想想，我们何尝不是如此：在大众前的我，和独自的我，是否也在扮演着另一个故事中的两个角色呢？

EDC Performance-Lim Heng Xin
EDC performed for assembly.

The emcees were rather weak and lacklustre, like u noe..anticlimax? Yeah.

The first play was ok, it was about various people losing their cool. This is like a everyday kind of play, and it sort of relates to teenagers as we tend to get heated easily.

It was rather simple, and i quite liked e stage style. There were the yellow mural boards and colourful chairs. the only downside thing were; Most of the actors/actresses were rather weak and there were too many scene changes. That was a tad confusing.

Michael actually acted a guaikia(good student) omfg. Imagine our reactions when we heard michael handing in homework. So not him! But i tink michael did a much better job than one of the male leads; the guy in red shirt. He was like reading from e script like that you know? Lack of feelings, no emotions.

Then the 2nd one came up... it was..abit..lame. its something about building singapore from scratch. Raffles finding singapore. There were many zhi1 ti3 involved. Kinda like a xingti ju ba. This kind of play should actually be very entertaining de..

But the way their lower secs portray it.. You might tink they were replaying resident evil for us. In other words, lum nua la. Maybe they should have asked cheong may lan join them T_T heh. This was one of e weakest plays.

The 3rd play was the only decent one really. Ok i dint really get what was going on as my attention span was running out. But the acting was well-done, natural and comical. It should be, since its their upper sec members doing it.

Most lower sec actors/actresses had the same problems. They werent daring enough and they really sounded like they were reading from the script! I think it was due to reciting too much plainly from the script and not acting it out together.

All in all, it is actually still pretty much EDC's usual standards. No improve, no deprove either.

再見白蛇傳﹐哈羅翔鷹﹗－林勤之
感謝那些付了$16來看<<再見白蛇傳>>﹐也對沒來的說聲抱歉﹐你們錯過了一場很不錯的戲﹗

其實小青是條男蛇﹐迷戀白蛇﹐死心塌地。一回白蛇向青蛇挑戰﹐如果白蛇輸了便得心甘情願地嫁給青蛇﹔但倘若青蛇輸了﹐便要變做女兒身﹐永遠服侍白蛇。只有500年功力的青蛇自知很難戰勝﹐但愛使人痴狂。

青蛇輸了。

莫明其妙地混進<<再見白蛇傳>>﹐認識了很多人﹐玩得很開心﹐學了很多東西﹐也愛上了白蛇傳。所以即使有些人反應劇本那裡那裡不夠好﹐我都不以為然。只好怪種種的限制不允許導演把這故事以最精彩﹑最完整的方式呈現給觀眾。

在戲裡﹐禮蓮是白蛇﹐沛珊是青蛇﹐嘉翊是許仙﹐煒竣是法海。但如果仔細想一想﹐你就會發現﹐在戲裡的現實沛珊才是白蛇﹐愛上了一個不應該愛的人﹔青蛇則是煒竣﹐願意痴痴地等待愛的人﹔禮蓮是許仙﹐一個被愛的人﹔嘉翊才是拆散情侶的法海。錯綜複雜的情節﹐對我而言反而能凸顯現實中的可笑的一面。導演說過﹐幾乎每個人在生活中都會扮演著這四角的其中一角。

那些置疑沛珊在戲中的性傾向的人﹐把猜測保留在心中好嗎﹖畢竟這裡是新加坡。若隱若現的東西總是特別美﹔赤裸裸反而不好看。有些東西真的是非常簡單且自然的事實。

在這個時候我想到了我們的翔鷹。我們有文森﹑珮文﹑歐慧等老將﹐又有藍老師﹑謝老師等資深的指導老師﹐一群肯付出的校友﹐還有我們孜孜不倦的李老闆﹐只差那些在籍學生們的熱忱罷了。我本身好喜歡好喜歡戲劇﹐<<再見白蛇傳>>正好就是一股推動力。

最後﹐謝謝大家的支持。雖然在戲裡只是一隻小蟹﹐但這次真讓我更上一層樓。只要是喜歡戲劇的人﹐也無須害怕爬樓梯會累﹐享受一下流汗的過程﹐總有一天會到頂樓。這是我的分享﹐大家為翔鷹加油吧﹗

勤之

《再见白蛇传》：不是最好，但却是不错的选择－李老板

《再见白蛇传》没有我想象中的难看，因为之前文森看后回来告诉我很“难看”。不知为何他如此批评，不过一些桥段正如他所言，有点第八波道似的媚俗。但总的来说，以十六元的票价在周末的晚上看这样一部富娱乐性的演出，我想还是值得的。不敢奢望再有《遥远的星球一粒沙》这样的惊喜，毕竟还是新加坡剧场。

对于《再见白蛇传》的观感，蛮赞同欧慧的看法。但由于身为老师，又带了一群半大不小的学生去观戏，所以对戏中的同性恋恋情很不以为然，如果早知道有涉及如此课题，我应该不会带大家去观戏。但有的同学，而且是中三同学，竟然不明白沛珊爱的不是嘉翊而是礼莲。或许不止她们看不懂，而是我所带去的大多数都看不懂？是因为这一代的华文华语程度都普遍退步了吗？不过，至少有三人肯定看得懂，他们就是陈郁、紫明与白楠啦。

至于最后那段许仙与白蛇的舞蹈，我想欧慧的看法是蛮深刻的，当时的我只想到沛珊希望自己与礼莲能像许仙与白蛇一样成双成对，但却搞不懂为何她是白蛇，礼莲是许仙。看了欧慧的解释，我觉得蛮有道理的：沛珊总是像白素贞似的对许仙死心塌地，礼莲则像许仙对白素贞般的对待沛珊，永远的让沛珊失望、伤心。欧慧看戏的功力是越来越强了，有青出于蓝的潜能哦。

还想说一说勤之，看到自己的学生在校外演出如此精彩，自豪之感油然而生。那段结尾充场面的戏很好玩，勤之在舞督（那个女演员虽然非主角，但演得太好了，没有她，无法串场，戏味也出不来）的带领下，戏的节奏掌握得很好，在适时的时候引爆笑弹，引来全场捧腹大笑。勤之演喜剧越来越驾轻就熟，希望他再接再厉，不要放弃多年努力的成果。

总的来说，《再见白蛇传》虽然不是一部高水准的制作，但它容易看，不会曲高和寡，也不会故弄玄虚，有可让我们学习的地方，还是值得我们（中学生们）去捧场的。

再见白蛇传观后感－陈欧慧

只想趁我还记忆犹新时，写下短短的观后感。觉得看了今晚所呈现的剧后，有些失望。感觉上好像不及于自己所观看过海燕等人其他的剧目。虽然，他们的戏，我并没看过多少，但我觉得这部剧的震撼力并不及《风从哪里来》。《风》的故事虽然在我脑海里早已模糊，但是我记得当时我回到家后，还带着观看这部戏的感觉。我也记得看戏时，自己不经意的流下眼泪。《再》并没这样大的影响力。我也不是很被这故事感动。今天的戏的“感染力”不是很够。　
　　
　　喜欢的是戏里的3位女主角都演的很不错。男演员则差了些。戏中的4角恋，加入了同性恋的元素，是唯一我觉得比较新颖的地方。可是，就连这个剧情也蛮老掉牙了。在其他的电影/戏里都已看过类似的故事情节。自己最喜欢的是最后一幕，当戏里的舞督讲完独白后，戏中释演佩珊角色的演员从戏里演小青的一角，最后却换上白蛇的服装，而戏里的礼莲从戏中戏的白蛇换成许仙的服装。她们演了一小段的在桥上雨中相遇的情节。就有如佩珊总是像白素珍似的对许仙死心塌地，礼莲则像许仙对白素珍般的对待佩珊，永远的让佩珊失望，伤心。

　　再见，两个字让我想起了以前在自称《九日忆》的小组里所写的短剧。我们的戏，学长们只给了“拍电影”三个字。哈哈。再见，也具有两个意思，再次见面与道别。所以，《再》在更深一层的思考下，也别有意义。这也是这部戏另一个我喜欢的一点。=）